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PostSubject: The Ents - Chapter 1   Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:07 pm

Introduction


The Ents is a Comedy based on Wild Life and such talking and doing what humans would do (Anthropomorphism) also trees coming to life. It begins with a Rabbit being chased by a Fox through a forest in the middle of the night. Enjoy!

Thumper frantically dashed through the vines and dug-up roots of Unity Forest away from Ginga, the Fox. Thumper was becoming even more tired by the minute, and had to try to out-smart the Ginga. He thought and thought and thought until he came to a conclusion. He headed East towards The Witch's Circle. Just as Thumper was about to collapse, Ginga came high-tailing after him at the same speed as he was when the pursuit began. But, a root lifted from the ground, and his dirt-smothered face skidded to a halt along with the rest of his body.

"STOP! DESIST!" yelled a voice, which appeared to come from nowhere.

"W-w... what???" asked Ginga, wiping his mug with a chipped and cut paw.

"You Shall Not Pass!" bellowed the voice, louder this time. It boomed through the dense, jungle-like wood. There was a stunned silence now, as Ginga stood there, gob smacked by this sudden occurance.

"The Meaning Of Chasing This Innocent Hopper - TELL ME!" shouted the voice.

"I... I was only... going to ask him... if he knew what time it was..." panted Ginga. "Who - or what - are you, anyway?"

"I'm A Tree" replied the voice.

"No you're not..."

"I AAAAAMMM!!!!" screamed the voice, leaving a quiet ring in the ears of the confused being.

"My name is Bowzer" said he, in a much calmer way than usual.

"I...I... have a job for you, Mr. B... Bowzer" wimpered Thumper.

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What does Thumper have in store for Bowzer? Find out in Chapter 2! You now know the 3 Main Characters!

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PostSubject: Re: The Ents - Chapter 1   Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:34 pm

It's a decent start, slightly funny - hopefully it'll get funnier though Razz
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PostSubject: Re: The Ents - Chapter 1   Sat Oct 18, 2008 3:16 pm

It will be! This is only an Introduction!
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PostSubject: Re: The Ents - Chapter 1   Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:16 pm

I dont really understand the end.

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