Discuss Valtua here. (do not post in the actual chapters)

Right now, i'll only post the prologue. Chapter 1 is scheduled for the end of the week. (but it could take longer)


i know it's in the rules, but let me post it here anyway:

if you say my story's bad, then tell me how to make it better. don't just say "it sucks!". Instead, say "it sucks, because..."

Well, it's only the prologue at the moment so there's not much you can show. But, it's still a strong base for a story.

seems pretty good to me so far

I think a map would definitely help. Me, at least.

i'm in the middle of making it (it'll take a while before it's finished though)

How long does it take? Some ovals here, some rectangles there..,()

well, the basic Paint map is pretty much done (i might make some changes later on)


but here's the thing, you better sit down

atm, i'm making an interactive map using RPG Maker 2003. you'll be able to walk around on the map, enter villages, ...ect. (it'll just be a map, its NOT gonna be a game )

that is, IF i can find a way to upload it or something.

i'm gonna upload the Paint map and temporarily post that one.

0_o I dont get it. Sounds exciting though!